Thursday, January 12, 2012

Breaking apart


breaking apart

My mirror has broken.
It did not make any sound, as it fell on the
grass.
My head hung, I could see the broken sky with muddy borders in the
grassy background.
There are mirrors now; they are mirrors, on the ground.
Broken memories smashed onto the field where I stood, without bending.
The first drop of rain fell on the
glass.
The numb drops came softer and light.
The parts of my moist mirror were caught into the soggy field that made no sound.
There are mirrors now; they are mirrors, on the ground.
Came the wind as I stood still in the pin drop game.
The sun trespassed and washed me dry, now
nothing bent and nothing hung – the parts no more mine, that lay on the
grass.

6 comments:

  1. This is an awesome expression..yes ..as we walk long roads..cross seven seas... we do have mirrors.. to see in small pieces...wonderful Supratik.... Kaushik

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    1. Thanks for your comments..the mirrors are images of ourselves and breaking away from them is a kind of liberation.

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  2. Hi,

    This is Sumitra again. 'There are mirrors now; they are mirrors, on the ground' I read this line again and again. From your comments, I understand it is liberation. I agree with Kaushik, it is an awesome expression.

    Regards,
    Sumitra

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  3. Awesome expression! I just got into your blog by chance! Would like to know more about you. Tarunima.

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